Perfect! You took it exactly where I was wanting it to go! Thank you for continuing my story and reinvigorating my interest in it.

Tightly written, with a killer ending (no pun intended).

wow. kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time.
I love how descriptive you got with the 2 bullet wounds and where they hit. especially the line “I was dead before my body hit the ground” nicely written and very suspenseful