Do more villains.

Like like like love.
For some reason things like this never attract to me but you wrote it very real and how the dialogue speaks to one another is nicely composed and put together.
It’s probably not what you were going for but i saw like a good cop/bad cop thing going but I definitely don’t think cops are allowed to hit someone much less saw off their hands and feed it to them haha.
Anyways, ignore my tangent.
it was nicely written