Great last line, and the excuses set up the background perfectly.

When i wrote this i spent a lot of time agonizing over that last paragraph. It still doesn’t feel right to me, but i haven’t been able to look at it with fresh eyes, either. Thanks!

Wow, some of those reasons starting from “When things get hard…” reminds me of why I ended up hating my ex. I feel like I can identify a lot with this piece and it’s an interesting read.