really powerful concept. there are a few spelling mistakes so you might want to proof read it, but good job overall! I’d really like to see where this story is going. I wonder exactly what her mother did to her.

Such a painful scene. Many spelling errors, but I’ll overlook those because of the details. :)

The way you let the daughter’s pain show in the writing really is what makes this concept so appealing. Just reading it I could almost feel the girl’s abandonment, and the mother regretting her choices. Very well done, lots of spelling mistakes but those can easily be fixed.