Interesting poem

Yeah….not really. It’s scattered. I don’t remembered what made me attempt whatever this was.supposed to be. But I don’t like it.

Don’t like it all you want… I think it’s OK. It just needs to be read with the right rhythm. It’s definitely not your best work but it isn’t bad by any means. It’s a decent poem that tells a real story. Put it aside for a bit and look at it in a few weeks. Maybe you’ll like it, or be able to adjust it so that you like it.