This is a very interesting story.
I really like how interesting it is though
After his father’s burial, they don’t think about the death but what to buy for dinner. their mentality is really odd during the part you talk about milk (which I like a lot especially the last line of that paragraph)
Very real though like if someone died they would think about the death but it’s more interesting that this person is thinking the very opposite which makes the story engaging in it’s own way.
awesome job.

I like it. A very good example of talking about something without talking about it directly. Really nicely done.

I really like the story. The first line is so powerful and the fact that the father isn’t mentioned again emphasizes how difficult it is to deal with death.

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