I didn’t see where it was going and then the end hit me. Very clever. Now the first line makes a lot more sense. And I feel stupid =) There’s a very dark/sick humour to this. I like.

Fantastic. Minor grammar check. “I can’t believe I’ve only fallen three floors out of twenty” – I was also struck by the ending, deserves 2 reads to appreciate.

Thank you both, I need to start checking my grammar before I post :s

It’s always more important to get your content out. Any monkey can check grammar.