On the brink of something here, but no idea what. :) Either way, this person has to move to make change. Trust the Mistress of Well-Intentioned Indecision, this moment happens often, and if you don’t decide and act, time will choose for you.

Superb portrayal of paralyzing indecision. I could be wrong, but I don’t think the story has any intent beyond capturing that.

And if time chooses for you, you won’t like what it decides.
Been there. A lot. In situations almost exactly like this.
So anyway. Very well done

Yep, mark tagged it. The point was to keep the nature of the situation complete vague. Sure, I knew what I meant, but I wanted you to be able to insert yourself and your situation.

Thanks for the comments, guys.

Well, I learned something. I dislike repeats of “the”. Mark made his comment and you followed…..I guess “the” used multiple times creates a sense of vagueness, which isn’t a state of mind I care for to much, which makes the story work a suffocating vagueness. Answers dammit, I want answers!