Great last line. I definately got steampunk from it – which I’m guessing was your focus. I felt it focussed on two characters really: the robot and the narrator. In a way, they almost make up one complete character = the physical and the reaction to that physical presence.
Gorgeous detail of descript, had me reaching for my dictionary a couple of times as well which I always enjoy. ‘nothing but purpose’ if only humans could be so wonderfully functional! (apologies for the late comment)
Abby (LoA)
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