I think you’re a little harsh, AVMW. I liked it and, since it’s an entry to a challenge is, to me, something of a sequel to the challenge; so although it stands on its own, a bit of leeway to rely on the challenge seems fair.

Thank you AVMW for the very useful feedback :) I have always had an issue with commas. I seem to put them in when they aren’t needed :/ I was also unsure about the last two questions when I published it. I will amend both of these factors when I have time, but I am doing my A-levels at the moment so I have been busy recently. Also, Funky Chunky, thank you :)