Funky Chunky

I see you’re attempting I-shamblic Randameter! ;)

Joking aside, in my opinion when writing comic verse of this kind (says he having only ever written one!) it works better when adhereing to a strict meter and rythm.

I love int-ernationaly and I beg to differ…you are wrong

l think this could easily be a 5 for me with a bit of a tweak.

P.S. have you seen Sonnet 18b?

• Posted over 7 years ago.
• 4 out of 5