As a stand alone this is my favorite line “This and that and you and me and us and them will last forever.” In the context of your poem “Infinities don’t last,” is my next fave. I got into it. It’s a good poem.
As a stand alone this is my favorite line “This and that and you and me and us and them will last forever.”
In the context of your poem “Infinities don’t last,” is my next fave.
I got into it. It’s a good poem.
I agree. A fine poem. And that line, “infinities don’t last” really caught my eye too. I loved this too. “You’re standing next to me in that loud room and for a second I swear I see our fleeting weekends flash with your infectious smile but the moment passed and I breathe." Takes you right there. Very good.
I agree. A fine poem. And that line, “infinities don’t last” really caught my eye too. I loved this too.
I swear I see our fleeting weekends flash with your infectious smile but the moment passed and I breathe."
Takes you right there. Very good.
Tad Winslow 
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