Tragic-sexy-dark-comedy, or maybe it’s just a tragedy. There’s something sinister behind the romance. I sense a smidgen of contempt. I don’t physically react to titles, usually, but yours made me droop my chin into my chest in a ‘I give up’ gesture and commence to shake from a seismic chortle attack. 5 pencils for that alone.

Thanks Tad! I cherish your opinions greatly.

Love is long suffering…literally and figuratively

This is definately on of the better pieces I’ve read on ficly in a while. Visually descriptive without being crude, and captures the beauty of the loving someone enough even though it is uncomfortable and even painful.

THAT is love. Beautiful and painful and sad. This was so good.

I hope I don’t get that old and oblivious.

I hope I can find someone who loves me that much, despite me being old and oblivious.

I hope I can find someone who loves me that much, despite me being old and oblivious.

I’m so sorry this is so belated on the commenting
But I just wanted to tell you that this was truly awesome til the end. I feel bad for this woman but the fact that she is willing to be in pain like that is interesting. This held me through the whole story and I loved it a lot. awesome job.