You’re not wasting my time. Ficly is a place for all of us to grow as writer’s and explore. It wouldn’t be the same without you!
The structure of your poem made me slow down and read more carefully, which made your message really stand out. It has the mark of truth and integrity of emotion— it comes across as real and not artificial. It’s the absolute opposite of fictional, flowery lyrics. This kind of writing definitely has a place of importance in poetry.
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Tad Winslow