Very sequel-able. I like the minimal but vivid image of the crimson lake, as well as the subtle details (rising moons) that give this an otherworldly quality.
Ooh, I missed the plural moons, or I thought it was a typo. I’d read the Oxygen comment as it being a very old protagonist. Well, this changes everything! Great little story with a whole lot to it.
jesteram
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