fly should be turned to flew because the rest is past tense. But other than that it’s good :) Well done, keep going.

It’s all in present tense.. so it’s fine.
It’s nice to have a perspective change once in a while.

Really fun idea. I particularly like the ‘leggy balls’. Well done on your first ficlet. More, please!

this is a quirky and playful little ficly. who knew a ball could have so much fun?