Nice, it is a sort of phoenix!

Wonderful. I was thinking of having a go until read this!

Excellent entry.
@Funky Chunky- My thoughts exactly but if we don’t play we can’t ever win.

I love how well this matches the style of my opening paragraph. I love that you kept the (most thought it a bird) line going. Very nice entry!

also, if you other guys are thinking of entering, then go for it!

I agree! You should all enter too because I want to read what you come up with!!!

Wow, sorry for the multiple comments, ficly acts weird on mobile. Also, you’re a champion!

This is fantastic. The visuals, and the elements. I think the bird is the epitome of human.