Good descriptions and character. Also, a space-bike is just an awesome idea.
This and its sequels remind me a little of Firefly, but probably only because it’s a sort of Space westernish thing and I just watched some episodes. shrug
Thanks for the kind words. I guess it’s hard not to sound somewhat like Firefly given the subject matter, but I’m definitely not trying to mimic it. I’m just going where the story takes me. Hopefully I can finish what I have in mind in time.
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