Awesome bit of writing!

I agree with Elsha. Tis indeed awesome. I love writers who are brave enough to put accent into their dialogue. In this case it really adds to the overall image of the characters and to the situation they are in.

At first I thought post-apocalyptic, but your tags say sci-fi. Hmm.

For sure I like Leon. He’s very frank, honest and says what he’s thinking even though he seems to be going against his principles. The names are great too. I have a character called Leon who I adore.

The last line is a little sad. But it really added to my newfound love for Leon.
Great writing, great character. I love it!
Thank you very much for entering. Very enjoyable to read.