Hmm, another one sentence. It’s a good sentence, but like I told the last guy whose story upon which I commented (yes, correct grammar can sound that weird), I’d like to encourage you to try and write the setting that explains this sentence or jumping from here to more of a story.

I liked this one a lot.

Well done.

@THX 0477 this and that other one you commented on are challenge entries.

Only supposed to be six words long.