Write a sequel to help flesh things out here. I like the disorientated effect you have going, as if the main character just woke up from a coma, but that also works against you because things are vague. This is a good start if you keep going with it
Tex. :’) I love this a lot, I always imagined Tex would have flashes of memories like this, especially during therapy. I think you did a great job with this.
The Ghost in the Machine LoA
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