wonderful visuals and build up, just one minor thing…. wall of words=not read much. Unless a story demands one long paragraph, I’ve noticed a tendency for readers to skip stories; a line break or two helps also, welcome to ficly!
wonderful visuals and build up, just one minor thing…. wall of words=not read much. Unless a story demands one long paragraph, I’ve noticed a tendency for readers to skip stories; a line break or two helps
also, welcome to ficly!
Thank you for the welcome and the advice:) I’ll remember to break it up.