This is more about air than the bridge over water, air and zen.

You’re right. I substituted ‘Air’ for ‘Bridge’ in the title.

I wrote the title first, and whatever thought I had that had anything to do with a bridge definitely vanished by the end. haha.

Thanks. It’s better now.

The end — those last lines — the way they slope. It’s aestheticly pleasing as well as linguistically. I always love the way you pay attention to the shape.

I could do with a calm.

The potency of the descriptions within this poem baffle me. Bravo.