I like this. It has a dreamlike aura but still a plot, still a turning point and an ending and feeling of a man who was clearly once yours, then God, then yours again.
Quick technical: missing something; beads. The semi-colon should be a colon, as “beads” couldn’t stand alone as a sentence.
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Jae
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
ElshaHawk (LoA)