This is an oddly light but emotional piece. It doesn’t get weighed down by itself, it’s not angsty. It’s lovely.

It is sad, melancholic, and it, almost ashamed to admit this, reminds me of myself.

One personal critique is the double ‘you’ in the second to last line makes the reader stumble a bit. The ‘for you’ could be cut, but that’s a very opinionated niggle.

Also I understand why you did it, but the ‘you and I’ is technically incorrect, should be ‘me’.

I made it more of a pause at the incorrect “you and I” as if the speaker changed their mind halfway through the sentence. Thanks for the ‘for you’ tip, I fixed that! Wonderful praise, thanks!