Yikes! Beautifully written but scarily depressing!

Whoa! Beautiful in a sincerely tragic way…this was gorgeous.

Oh my God! I’m at a loss for words.
It was so beautiful… so dark and… I don’t even know. Amazing.

I have absolutely no words.
Well done.

metaphoric host/parasite relationship, and the simplicity makes this even stronger.

wow. Loved the way you handled this. It’s a darkness with depth without being too depressing. Very beautifully written!

A beautiful play on time and perspective. Tragic and mesmerizing.

Very polished story. I was completely absorbed by it immediately. Thanks for sharing this with us.

I agree with all the others, this was very special. It was a haunting and yet beautiful read.