This is a good example of good ficly writing. what went right: 1. No wall of text (I hate reading one long wall of text) 2. Good believable dialog 3. nice twist ending (even if the story’s tags foreshadows it) 4. Good title.
This is a good example of good ficly writing. what went right:
1. No wall of text (I hate reading one long wall of text) 2. Good believable dialog 3. nice twist ending (even if the story’s tags foreshadows it) 4. Good title.
Wizard? Sounds more like an alien. :D Write a sequel or I will attempt one of my own. :P
Krulltar 
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)