I know, it’s been done. And anyone from the camp will know this was shamelessly stolen.

I’d change it to “Last man alive hears a knock.” Puts more focus on the single knock and the present tense adds tension. And the word “the” is simply wasting space.

Very cool image though. A definite Twilight Zone feel.

eerie. i think i would freak if i was the only one alive an then i heard knocking. haha. nice job

@John
You make a good point. I don’t know if I feel like that’s cheating, since that’s changing the entire story (rolling eyes).

Apparently I went to the wrong camp. I don’t get it.

You thief! I didn’t go to the camp, but I just want you to feel bad. hah

Cool! Very spooky…or heartwarming. Maybe he’s not the only one left alive! Horray for him!

I’m with THX. We didn’t go to this camp.

To Ronnie’s comment: the knock is not necessarily from another man. Or even another human.

It’s not a joke or anything. I showed Ficly to some friends at this writing camp I went to, and said that so they would acknowledge it if they ever read this.

Hey! Cheater! I’m going to call the writing police.