A prince, an heir. :)

Congratulations for spearheading the NaFicWriMo. May a thousand people follow in your footsteps.

The story was not what I expected from the title. It flows well and everything is broken up nicely. The repeated italic line feels very sincere. I have no criticisms, but I am not surprised.

I love that the prayer came unbidden to her mind, this flows nicely.