Comments on All in a Heart Beat by Nuno Teixeira

Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

Creepy
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
neil kant

Scary, sweet!
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
neil kant

My girlfriend laughed out loud at the ending in a good way! “wasn’t going to be beating her best time”
- Posted over 7 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
H.S. Wift

An interesting tale. A deadly end to something that started out so innocent. One criticism is that I don’t like the repeat of the word “rate” in the second line. “Her heart rate was steady” would have worked just as well, and be less jarring to read.
- Posted over 7 years ago.
Nuno Teixeira

I like your suggestion better H.S. Wift! Not sure how that slipped past!
- Posted over 7 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

You have a way with beasts!
I was expecting a twist, but I was still surprised.
- Posted over 7 years ago.