A couple quick things:
- 2nd paragraph, “overseed” → “oversaw”
- Consider splitting the 2nd paragraph at “Her least favorite…” so that Celebrity Secrets gets its own focus.
- 3rd paragraph, “opponent”→ “opponent”
- 4th paragraph, “nevera” → “never a”
- 4th paragraph, “secretly helped” → “helped” (because you end the sentence with “game of secrets”… avoids the repetition… and period there btw :))

I wouldn’t want to live in this world haha. Damn gossip mags.

I like it. Secret Organization. Clever.

On Nuno’s comment, you wrote the same word twice in your 3rd paragraph correction. The first one should’ve had a single p. I’m also OK with the secretly in the end sentence as it is emphasising the secret theme running through the story. But there should be a full stop at the end.

All in all, a good read.

Sorry for all the typos and mistakes. I wrote this really late on my nook so it is very difficult to type on it. I will edit this story when i get on my laptop. :D