Just like a poem a enjoyed reading. ‘Just like’ seems contradictory at first. ‘Just’ means exactly while ‘like’ means nearly. Exactly nearly? However, you’re saying that the similarity to the actual thing is what’s exact. Wait, what am I saying. I’ll look at it tomorrow with fresh eyes. Anyway, I liked it.

“just like a dizzy fizzy girl”
haha, great line. Very original but we all know exactly what that is.