My only quibble with this is the use of ‘uncomfortably’ in the first sentence — it’s not quite clear whether it’s referring to the horse or the rider. Otherwise, great piece with a bleak mood.

I proofread this piece at least 5 times and didn’t see that. Thanks, Jim.

You certainly have a way with capturing a moment in time!

Excellent story; very well written. O, if I could write half as well… oh, the fame and fortune I would most certainly amass!
(You proofread 5 times? Maybe I should do that? ;)