The character of Jenny Everywhere is available for use by anyone, with only one condition. This paragraph must be included in any publication involving Jenny Everywhere, in order that others may use this property as they wish. All rights reversed.

I think your first paragraph could be tightened a little. The first sentence should end with a question mark. You also mix metaphors: an ‘icy fear’ finds ‘fertile ground’.

(’Jenny’s’ should be ‘Jennys’; also, I don’t think you can ‘wield’ a rune.)

Good to see the oblivion ring turn up again – do you think that she’s growing dependent on it?