Haha that wasn’t the tone i heard it in, but a very interesting episode nevertheless :)

‘Owlishly’ – very nice. There are a few small “oversights” in the last paragraphs: :“the” fat Englishman’s… and ….clouds began “to” roll. Hey at least you know I’m reading you. ;)

@ Petite- Thanks
@ Senor Bic- True. Plus every opportunity for correction is an opportunity to make the story better. I appreciate your feed back and am honored that, despite your busy schedule, you still have chosen to read me.