Oomph. I feel the weight of your anger in there. It’s just straight up animosity coming through clear as a bell. The complete poetic form of wrath. Not as innocent and fun as your gluttony one, but apt all the same. And the rhythm is good. I’m wonderig how to pronounce solace. Your rhyme makes me want to say sol-liss (so it matches ‘piss’) but, and I don’t know for sure, if sol-luss is the correct pronunciation. That’s how I say it, like sol-luss, so it tripped me up.

I say sol-iss but maybe it’s a British thing.

I think you really despise this person! :)