This. Is. Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! You could totally base a novel on this!
I am still thinking of writing a sequel for this. XD
Amusing, and I like the interplay of seriousness/tension with a bit of humor. Leaves it wide open for different possible directions. A few typos along the way but overall solid.
Fixed? Also I am flattered that I earned a prequel AND a sequel within in an hour of each other.
This is a great piece. Well done!
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)
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