I feel like you had two themes juggled quite well… Nicely done!

Haha. Cyclops. Does he have a collection of eyes??

I haven’t decided on whether he collects them or eats them (or both). If I come back here, maybe I’ll flesh it out (no pun intended).

Maybe he keeps his favorites and eats the rest? Haha.

I’m liking the keeping idea. Eating them is a bit icky. You should continue this. I’ve been drawn in by it.

For you, Abby- anything!

Pending some research.

=D

I like the mood you’re setting here. I wasn’t sure what direction you were going with this, so when I first read that a hoarse voice said “Here,” I thought it was the “dead” body speaking…

I’ll try to think if there’s a way to change it and be more clear. I’d rather not be ambiguous.