This is great. Love the description – very foreboding and sorta film-noir.
Love the last line – and love that the wind had to ‘fight’ through the curtains.

Thank you sir… The film-noir tone is what I was going for, and the whole piece was built around the two lines you cited. Thanks for noticing!

Bravo good sir. The scene is painted well, although I didn’t quite catch on that it was a suicide note until reading the tags.