A great ending – appropriately tragic for a Roman piece. I would suggest replacing the last ‘as’ with ‘and’ – it creates a more final tone overall. I can’t wait to see how Traian got to this point. Good ficly, and a brilliant idea for a challenge.
A great ending – appropriately tragic for a Roman piece. I would suggest replacing the last ‘as’ with ‘and’ – it creates a more final tone overall. I can’t wait to see how Traian got to this point.
Good ficly, and a brilliant idea for a challenge.
Abby (LoA)