Tragic bit of exposition. Some of the sentences in the first paragraph feel a bit long, but I don’t think any are actual run-on sentences. So, style point on that one, I guess. Nice depiction of addiction and being in a rut of doing bad things.
Thank you! And yes I know that I do tend to write pretty long sentences, but it’s a habit I haven’t quite figured out how to get rid of yet.
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