I like the suspense that’s building here. I want to know who the main character is, and why he’s hunting this man.

Also, no need to explain why you’re writing in first person. Just write! :)

Welcome to Ficly. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Thank you. I explained only because so $any frown upon first person writting! I am glad you enjoyed this! I shall write a sequel next I believe. Perhaps you would care to add on yourself!