I did my best to write ahead and not write to much. Sorry about a few punct. errors

This sets the scene very well, and leaves plenty of questions for the reader to look forward to see answered. That said, a few nitpicks:
“new” → “knew”
It might read better to describe the cave before the hood is put on, since then he wouldn’t be able to see them. I’m also curious how the hood can be removed if there is no one there with him. All these are small points and fixable, and overall I quite like the story!

ya the mystery of the hood bein removed by another person yet him not seeing anyone was what I was going for but did not discribe. I might correct it as I wrote it for a challenge by “Jae” so I’m not really continuing it like he is. Thanks though!