Very nice. Better than the first, though it seemed a little different (voice/style). The “looking glass” part threw me (I know you followed it up), but the overall rhyming was very good.

They made the list of rhymes end with change, turtle, glass, then strange, fertile, pass. It was tough, since it didn’t follow the rest of the rhyme scheme—they said it was some type of sonnet, but I cheated and used 16 lines.

Cheater… *