Another notable entry. Some thoughts:

Traian’s emotions are superbly crafted, interwoven with references to the past and ritualistic acts that further delve into the details of the Magnuroc.

While the inclusion of a giant is acceptable, let’s avoid straying too far into the fantastic. Sq’Aborm actually reminds me of the statue of Rodrian. Perhaps a connection can be made.

Thanks. :)

I was a little worried about the inclusion of a “giant” – its not intended to be literal. He’s just a monstrously tall man, not a giant out of fairy tales.