Ooooooooh, this sounds like it’s gonna be a good series. Lemme know if you want another writer in the making of this story if you like.

Amazing amount of details!

Some repetition of snow and fell, which is my pet peeve. Well played with a hint of backstory and strong problem for the character. This is a great starter for a series.

Ah, I hadn’t even noticed the repetition of snow and fell until Elsha pointed it out. Hehe.