Great job! The song and this ficly definitely correlate!

For you and I, the common denominator is an unseen monster. I am starting to see this song as a sort of an inkblot test. The short sentences do you a lot of good and bring a fair amount of tension. In the middle the four sentences that start with ‘He’ stand out to me. I don’t know if that’s necessarily a bad thing but it was noticeable. Great job!