A steady and complete theme. Beautiful descriptive language. You used really interesting verbs too. I love this poem, and it brings back memories for me, of stargazing in the mountains until sunrise. Five pencils for you:)
I’m always so tempted to read your work aloud, because I’m sure it will sound beautiful. However, I hesitate… these poems affect me so much emotionally when I read them silently, I’d hate to see what they do when I give them my voice! I’d be a gibbering mess. Thank you thank you for your clear and sad and joyous and sublime voice! …. I’m a fanboy. :P
Breeze
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