We all need a hero at one point or another. Make sure to find one for those times.

The first half especially feels very conflicted. The pain and desperation certainly comes across.

First limerick is great. The ambivalence of the interior portion works really well.
I didn’t quite get was the “And she just lowered her head” – I’m assuming there’s a backstory of her getting reprimanded or something, not sure.

The second limerick, interior verse doesn’t rhyme – i tried saying it a few different ways, haven’t tried saying it with accents yet, but I think it could be made easier regardless.

The first- she knows it’s futile to argue so she just lowers her head in defeat.
The second- I’m American so maybe thats why? Haha. It sounds okay to me, not an exact rhyme, but sounds close enough.