I love it! It seems more fantasy-y. Your knight can be my damsel’s hero.

This sounds almost like a song, with a slight rhyme scheme.

Hmm. First limerick interior verse doesn’t seem to rhyme either, just like MissMay’s. Am I just unaware of a style of Limmerick?

Definitely know that feeling, though it begs the question that if his heart needs a maiden is the ensuing heroic action genuine or a result of infatuation?

Well, that was way to deep a thought for limericks. Nicely done, thought provoking and all that.

I thought the rhyme .. It seems a good song.
I liked it!